（古詩英譯）卜算子·獨自上層樓 – 程垓

同赞忘语君美译！的确，总是那么精致工整漂亮！"wail" ---  好选。

另，多谢忘语君其他线的鼓励！ 你才是高手，我跟着玩而已。

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赏学忘君好译，凑兴凑韵：

卜算子·獨自上層樓
程垓

独自上层楼，
楼外青山远。
望以斜阳欲尽时，
不见西飞雁。

独自下层楼，
楼下蛩声怨。
待到黄昏月上时，
依旧柔肠断。

Fortune Teller·Climbing the Stairs Alone
By Cheng Gai of Southern Song Dynasty

I walk up the stairs alone,
Green hills far beyond the eye.
As the slanting sunlight fades from sight,
I see no geese from west fly.

I walk down the stairs alone,
Below crickets sadly cry.
As the fair moon hangs high at twilight，
My heart still aches, and I sigh.

Tr. Xishan

譯得非常漂亮！