（（古詩英譯）寿阳曲潇湘夜雨 – 馬致遠

rovi297
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（（古詩英譯）寿阳曲潇湘夜雨 – 馬致遠 Dec 25, 2023 22:00:49 GMT -5 Immanuel, 溪山, and 1 more like this

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Post by rovi297 on Dec 25, 2023 22:00:49 GMT -5

寿阳曲潇湘夜雨 – 馬致遠

渔灯暗，客梦回。
一声声滴人心碎。
孤舟五更家万里，
是离人几行清泪。

Night Rain in Xiaoxiang by Ma Zhiyuan

The fishing lamps dim, he awoke,
Drip-drops until daybreak, this bloke,
Home miles away, in a lonely boat, his heart broke,
His nostalgia, his tears bespoke...

Tr. Wangyu
26/12/2023

Last Edit: Dec 26, 2023 0:50:59 GMT -5 by rovi297

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（（古詩英譯）寿阳曲潇湘夜雨 – 馬致遠 Dec 26, 2023 0:23:39 GMT -5 Immanuel, rovi297, and 1 more like this

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Post by 溪山 on Dec 26, 2023 0:23:39 GMT -5

忘语君厉害！赏学美译！

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寿阳曲潇湘夜雨 – 馬致遠

渔灯暗，客梦回。
一声声滴人心碎。
孤舟五更家万里，
是离人几行清泪。

Night Rain in Xiaoxiang to the Tune of Shou-yang
by Ma Zhiyuan of Yuan Dynasty

Fishing lamps are faint, his dream away flies.
Pattering rains my broken heart incise.
A lone boat at dawn, home neath remote skies,
Tears like rains, a drifter in despair cries.

Tr. Xishan

rovi297 Senior Member Posts: 444	（（古詩英譯）寿阳曲潇湘夜雨 – 馬致遠 Dec 26, 2023 0:52:44 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rovi297 on Dec 26, 2023 0:52:44 GMT -5 Excellent job Xishan! Happy translating 🌹🌹🌹👍

溪山 God Posts: 3,703	（（古詩英譯）寿阳曲潇湘夜雨 – 馬致遠 Dec 26, 2023 12:44:21 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by 溪山 on Dec 26, 2023 12:44:21 GMT -5 Thank you for your kind encouragement! I'm just following suit.

（（古詩英譯） 寿阳曲 潇湘夜雨 – 馬致遠

Post by rovi297 on Dec 25, 2023 22:00:49 GMT -5

Post by 溪山 on Dec 26, 2023 0:23:39 GMT -5

Post by rovi297 on Dec 26, 2023 0:52:44 GMT -5

Post by 溪山 on Dec 26, 2023 12:44:21 GMT -5

（（古詩英譯）寿阳曲潇湘夜雨 – 馬致遠