（古詩英譯）春江花月夜（其一）– 楊廣

忘语君译得漂亮，很有画面感！

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"春江花月夜"这个标题, 忘语君译得不错，我也是那个思路。
但为求异，索性译成 Spring River, Flowers, Moonlit Night。

凑一个：

春江花月夜（其一）– 楊廣

暮江平不动，春花满正开。
流波将月去，潮水带星来。

Spring River, Flowers, Moonlit Night
By Yang Guang, Emperor of Sui Dynasty

The stream lies still in th' afterglow,
In full bloom, spring flowers draw th' sight.
Ripples flow with the moon shadow,
Tides rise high, fetching the starlight.

Tr. Xishan

Brilliant renditions. Tail it…

春江花月夜（其一）– 楊廣

暮江平不动，春花满正开。
流波将月去，潮水带星来。

Moonshine on Spring River and Flower

At dusk the river becomes flat as if not moving,
In time Spring blooms start their grooving.  
Streaming waves just took the moon afar,
Ocean tides now bring about many a star.