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Post by Immanuel on Jul 29, 2021 22:51:13 GMT -5
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鹧鸪天 感旧
风清竹
聚若飞烟不似真，一朝香远暗消魂。
别时难辨雨中泪，觉后犹为梦里人。
倚暮色，见霜痕。流光不肯驻黄昏。
庭前依旧当时月，共我多情累此身。
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犹为：为二声，犹是。见：同现。霜痕：月色。
庭前句取意张泌：多情只有春庭月，犹为离人照落花。
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和，格律不通。
世事如梦梦如真
不系累心系游魂
夜半问卜销烛泪
年来惆怅作闲人
楼色清，追云痕
海光依旧逐晨昏
此时天涯共君月
何处飄蓬寄我身
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鹧鸪天 - 和一首
Jul 29, 2021 23:18:14 GMT -5
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Post by Immanuel on Jul 29, 2021 23:18:14 GMT -5
The world is a uncanny dream
Yet my dream is uncannily real
Bother not to anchor the wearied heart
pine hard to tie down the wandering soul
What a waste of candles
when trying to query future in the midnight
How fleeting is the past year
While eschewing feelings like an invalid
Heaven on top of rails is clear with but a trace of cloud
Like usual, the ocean shifts from dawn till dusk
Alas, the moon is the same as the one you are enjoying!
Howbeit, where is the ark that will carry me to the yonder?
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Post by rovi297 on Jul 30, 2021 1:41:45 GMT -5
The world is an uncanny dream Yet my dream is uncannily real Bother not to anchor the wearied heart pine hard to tie down the wandering soul What a waste of candles when trying to query future in the midnight How fleeting is the past year While eschewing feelings like an invalid The oceanic scene shifts with dawn and dusk As if nothing ever changed Alas, the moon is the same as the one you are enjoying! Howbeit, where is the ark that will carry me to the yonder? Howbeit, where is the ark that will carry me to the yonder? ----- You have lost your directions?  |
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鹧鸪天 - 和一首
Jul 30, 2021 2:14:25 GMT -5
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Post by Immanuel on Jul 30, 2021 2:14:25 GMT -5
Obviously! “为赋新诗强说愁”，说的就是我。  |
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Post by 溪山 on Jul 31, 2021 0:28:45 GMT -5
哈哈，昨晚看到忘語君的帖，我就竊笑。心想，文弟會如何回呢？ 看到文弟的帖，又笑。 兩位智商都超高哦。  |
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Post by 溪山 on Jul 31, 2021 0:31:16 GMT -5
原词： 鹧鸪天 感旧 风清竹 聚若飞烟不似真，一朝香远暗消魂。 别时难辨雨中泪，觉后犹为梦里人。 倚暮色，见霜痕。流光不肯驻黄昏。 庭前依旧当时月，共我多情累此身。 —— 犹为：为二声，犹是。见：同现。霜痕：月色。 庭前句取意张泌：多情只有春庭月，犹为离人照落花。 ———— 和，格律不通。 世事如梦梦如真 不系累心系游魂 夜半问卜销烛泪 年来惆怅作闲人 楼色清，追云痕 海光依旧逐晨昏 此时天涯共君月 何处飄蓬寄我身 文弟中英俱佳，自寫自譯。譯文別有韻味。  我也湊個熱鬧。和文弟，不管格律： 世事紛繁何為真 一朝夢斷做遊魂 年少花前無悲淚 老大鏡中有愁人 歎流年，水無痕 雲舒雲卷晨又昏 千江有水千江月 萬里斜陽照我身 |
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鹧鸪天 - 和一首
Jul 31, 2021 0:54:24 GMT -5
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Post by Immanuel on Jul 31, 2021 0:54:24 GMT -5
还是忘君witty得很！Swift drift like a windy lift, hard for us to catch or match… —- 歎流年，水無痕 雲舒雲卷晨又昏 千江有水千江月 萬里斜陽照我身 —- 实在是琼瑶之报。谢谢🙏 |
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Post by 溪山 on Jul 31, 2021 12:43:21 GMT -5
『还是忘君witty得很！』 －－－ 當然。 謝謝文弟鼓勵。我是比葫蘆畫瓢。 |
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