有请忘语君指教

深居俯夹城，春去夏犹清。
天意怜幽草，人间重晚晴。
并添高阁迥，微注小窗明。
越鸟巢干后，归飞体更轻。

An Octave by Li Shangyin
(Twilight)

A hermit, I overlook the small town,
Summer tempest ceased; it turns cool and clear.
Heaven pities low-born grass bending down,
The twilight, though late, still appears so dear,
In its faint glow my small loft and I drown,
Into the windows some tender gleams peer.
Moreover, in trees nests lie dried around,
Those nimble southern wings flutter with cheer.

毫无悬念、没有异议，一如既往的美译。先谢一下！

期待賞學邊草君美譯！